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Halal Meat
Halal Meat
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الحسن بكري
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- اشترك في: الاثنين مايو 09, 2005 6:51 pm
We've got a lot of bloodshed here. I appreciated every single word. Yet, expressions of praise do not apply - the topic doesn't allow for a 'show off' of feelings, delight ,in particular, doesn't 'pop up', does it? You could have added an extra line, though, then, here you are: a twenty first century sonnet! The guy is disgusting; the first time I completed reading Halal Meat I got sick, almost vomited.
Hafez this is real poetry! Thanks
Hafez this is real poetry! Thanks
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have had thier mark on everything ,in this NWO ( new world order
Hence, dear poets and follwers,
,Sonnets of our time are but one line short
Of what the ancient bards have sought
to fit into thier frame of mind,
Though the bloodshed is as ever the same,
the inquisition squads ,modern and past,
still roam the ragged terrain of human existence
Salam Bakri and Hafiz
have had thier mark on everything ,in this NWO ( new world order
Hence, dear poets and follwers,
,Sonnets of our time are but one line short
Of what the ancient bards have sought
to fit into thier frame of mind,
Though the bloodshed is as ever the same,
the inquisition squads ,modern and past,
still roam the ragged terrain of human existence
Salam Bakri and Hafiz
آخر تعديل بواسطة مصطفى آدم في الاثنين مايو 15, 2006 9:11 pm، تم التعديل مرتين في المجمل.
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Dear Mustafa Adam
this was my first attempt at publishing a poem I wrote in English and am glad it proved your point...
and, thanks for this:
V.A.T , G.A.T.and WTO but may not be WIPO,
have had thier mark on everything in this NWO ( new world order
Hence, dear poets and follwers,
Sonnets of our time are but one line short
Of what the ancient bards have sought
to fit into thier frame of mind
Though the bloodshed is as ever the same
the inquisition squads ,modern and past
still roam the raggid terrain of human existence
Dear Hassan Al-Bakry,
as you rightly said, praise is not relevant here, and if it's a must (for a reason of tradition, say) then reading this with such closeness (as to feel sick and nearly vomiting) is as good a praise and I should gratefully accept…
it is good to have you as readers, Bakri & Adam.... regards and respect! e
H>k
Dear Mustafa Adam
this was my first attempt at publishing a poem I wrote in English and am glad it proved your point...
and, thanks for this:
V.A.T , G.A.T.and WTO but may not be WIPO,
have had thier mark on everything in this NWO ( new world order
Hence, dear poets and follwers,
Sonnets of our time are but one line short
Of what the ancient bards have sought
to fit into thier frame of mind
Though the bloodshed is as ever the same
the inquisition squads ,modern and past
still roam the raggid terrain of human existence
Dear Hassan Al-Bakry,
as you rightly said, praise is not relevant here, and if it's a must (for a reason of tradition, say) then reading this with such closeness (as to feel sick and nearly vomiting) is as good a praise and I should gratefully accept…
it is good to have you as readers, Bakri & Adam.... regards and respect! e
H>k
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ايمان شقاق
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- اشترك في: الأحد مايو 08, 2005 8:09 pm